Your bio–especially on your website–is your first introduction to potential clients. So…what is it saying about you? Your bio needs to be professionally done.
Consider these two bios–the first of which is a non-pro version, and the second a professionally-written version. Consider the professionalism, the feelings–and overall which Realtor you’d opt for:
As a Realtor with 25 years experience in the business Jane can help you with your various buyer and seller needs in Edmonton. Jane’s experience and client testimonials can show you exactly why she should be your real estate agent of course—and why only SHE can give you the service you need, and get you a home for the most competitive price.
‘Living and Selling Edmonton’ is truly my passion. As a __Your City__ born and raised, this city has given me—and my kids, a lot to be grateful for… and we love it dearly (Alberta weather and all!). I couldn’t be more proud to assist other __Your City-ans__ and relocating families discover the best that our city, and each distinctive neighbourhood, has to offer.
After graduating high school in ’92 (let’s not do the math there) I responded to an ad for a receptionist at a small family brokerage. And I am so thankful that I did. From 1992 to 2008, I was immersed in fully learning the ‘real estate ropes’—everything from the day-to-day transactional needs, client accountability and services, to broker-level concepts ~ and believe you me, nobody knows the inner workings of a brokerage like the admins do!
In 2008 I decided to make the move from admin to Licensed Real Estate Agent—a move supported by the amazing team at __X Brokerage__. I remained there under the expert mentorship of __X Broker__ until 2016, when new opportunities took me in another direction…to X Brokerage.
Life … and other Stuff
Of course, no professional career is complete without a personal journey. I’ve been truly blessed with a fantastic (and thankfully supportive of my crazy ‘Realtor-hours’ career) husband—and 2 great kids, a 19-year-old daughter and 12-year-old son.
When we’re not checking out Edmonton arts, culture and other family events, we like to take adventurous trips to California, exploring the coast, beaches and visiting with extended family. But sometimes, even a Realtor needs to disconnect from technology and the hustle and bustle of City life, and reconnect with nature. Hauling the trailer up to the mountains for some remote random camping helps us to recharge!
In a fairly new addition to ‘the fam’ we recently invited into our home, a Yorkie puppy named ‘Ginny’ – much to the dismay of our grumpy resident cat. Ginny can often be seen accompanying me in ‘Real Estate Action’… riding shot-gun with trips to the office or delivering documents and keys to clients.
The ‘Talk of the Block’
The fam and I love our South Edmonton ‘Summerside‘ neighbourhood, and we can often be found enjoying the lake activities and community events at Summerside’s Exclusive Beach Club. Where residents can lay on the beach, swim in the lake, go fishing, play volleyball or tennis, or even take a boat out on the water. If this neighbourhood concept is of interest to you, give me a shout – I would love to show you ‘What’s To Love About Summerside’, and make YOUR family our newest neighbour!
Our family has been incredibly blessed, and we try everyday to not take that for granted. It’s this gratitude that encouraged me to be a proud supporter of the Children’s Miracle Network—to which I donate a percentage of every one of my commissions. Learn more about the Children’s Miracle Network here.
Takin’ Care of Business
With almost 25 years working in real estate, I’ve gained valuable experience that only decades can bring. The savvy real estate tricks I’ve learned have helped my own family & business succeed—and I would love the opportunity to put this experience to work for you!
My business is built on the relationships that only earned loyalty and trust can create. I’m not your Realtor today, I’m your Realtor for life… So don’t hesitate to contact me for a chat about a neighbourhood, future family/home goals, or anything else that might be of interest to you.
So–Which one Would YOU Prefer?
Part of our goal here at REwebsites is to help our clients portray themselves in the image they desire. Professionalism, personality and stand-out-ness are just some of the elements that our professional, on-staff writer can do. And this is in addition to the overall ‘street cred’ that our websites, content and marketing can offer.
Curious what a professionally-written bio costs? Great! Use the form below to begin your first step to a bio that truly illustrates not only who you are as an agent–but the type of client that you can truly help…